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Behind His Hazel Eyes 2

Behind His Hazel Eyes 2- Chapter 9 (END)

Nang makaalis na si Lucy ay tinanggal nya ang kumot sa mukha at tumitig sa kisame. Kung meron lang sanang mga butiki roon ay nakapatay na sya.

When the door opened and closed again ay hindi nya pa rin tinatanggal ang paningin sa kisame.

“Lucy I felt like eating taho…alam mo naman na comfort food ko ‘yun.” sabi nya rito.

“Then I’ll buy you one.” sabi ng isang napakapamilyar na boses.

Napabangon sya at nakita nga ang fly-by-night stranger sa loob ng silid nya.

Nagpalabas sya ng isang naiinis na ungol at nagtalukbong ulit ng kumot.

“Lucy told me you had a virus.” sabi nito.

“Oh! And surprisingly you didn’t know? You were the one who inflicted it!” Sumbat nya dito. “Just go away! I don’t talk to strangers!” Sigaw nya.

Finally! Nakasigaw narin sya ulit.

“You just did, Mia.” anito.

“And I won’t talk to you anymore!”

“And there! You just did it again…” pang-aasar nito sa kanya.

Nanginig sya talaga at marahas na umungol.

Naramdaman nya ang bigat nito nang umupo ito sa gilid ng kama nya.

“Mia…” tawag na naman nito.

No more words for you, Mr. Freakazoid!

Narinig nya ang mga buntong-hininga nito.

“Alright…I know you’re not talking…so I’m taking this as my chance to talk and your chance to listen…” ani Zack.

Mabilis na inilagay nya ang kanyang dalawang kamay sa magkabilang tenga nya.

She stared to hum para hindi niya marinig ang sinasabi nito.

“Lalala…No one’s listening, no one’s listening hahahaha, lalala…No one’s talking, no one’s here in my room but me…lalala.” kanta nya.

“Stop it, Mia.” narining nyang sabi nito.

Kaya mas nilakasan pa nya ang kanyang pagkanta, actually it wasn’t really called singing…she actually sounded like she was wailing!

In the middle of her making noises ay sumigaw din ito.

“I love you, Mia!”

At napahinto siya sa pagkanta sa sobrang gulat.

“Anon’g sabi mo?” tanong nya impulsively.

Biglang hinila ni Zack ang kumot na nakatabing sa kanyang katawan at inihagis sa kabilang kama.

And then their eyes met once more.

“I said…I love you Mia.” sabi nito.

Bigla ay pinanuyuan siya ng laway at hindi makapaniwalang nakatitig lang dito.

She looked at his beautiful face.

The face that she had been cursing for the rest of the week. And those eyes that made her fall in-love.

Binawi nya agad ang tingin dito at tinalikuran ito.

“What’s the fly-by-night thicko who took away my naivety to worldliness doing here?” inis na tanong nya.

“Excuse me? You’re calling me a thicko?…”

“Yes! Angal ka? Would a person in his normal self and with intelligence disappear just like that? Only a thicko would do that.” she was so on for a good word fight with Zack right now.

This is her time to take revenge…kahit sa salita lang.

“Well you can call me anything you like but just so you know? I did not disappear. Dumistansya lang ako kasi akala ko-“

Napabalikwas sya at manghang tinitigan ito.

“Dumistansya? Without a word?” tanong nya.

“Yes without a word because I was just-…I thought-“

“Blah blah blah! You thought what ha? Na inaagaw ko si Rafael, Oh yes I remember…the thicko called me despicable and a home wrecker. How’s that?” Pinandidilatan na nya ito. “And now what you realized…Oh, I’m sorry Mia, I was wrong…I love you…blah blah blah…” she even made faces.

To her surprise ay sobrang natawa si Zack sa kanya.

“I was jealous, I’ve never been jealous my entire life. I was living the kind of life where I have no right to feel jealousy because I have everything…well almost everything. And it’s something new to me and I didn’t know how to handle it,” paliwanag nito, “I thought you felt the same way as Rafael did. I know he likes you and I hate to compete with him. Although I am concerned with Charlize and Rafael, I actually just used that reason para layuan mo si Rafael mismo.”

Inis pa rin na tinutulak nya ito gamit ang kanyang paa para mahulog ito sa kama nya. At nahulog nga ito at napadaing saka hinawakan ang puwitan.

“Hey!” Tawag nito sa kanya. “I just told you I love you and it just seemed like it didn’t mean anything to you?” panggigilalas nito.

“Ah so gusto mo I love you mo lang ay malinis na ang pangalan mo?”

“Alright! What is it that I still have to clear up with you para matapos na ‘to?”

“How about, Mandy?” tanong nya.

She had been dying to know about their real score.

“Well, what about Mandy?” balik tanong nito.

Kinamaohan nya ito.

“Sagutin mo na lang kasi…ikaw ang may atraso eh. Palibhasa kung anu-ano ang iniisip…ayan tuloy you are getting the wrong idea.” gaya nya sa sinabi nito sa kanya noon.

“Sige, tanungin muna kita. Ano ba ang alam mo kay Mandy at sa akin?”

Ngumuso sya.

“Rafael told me she’s your girlfriend.” anya.

“Well, let me just rephrase that…She used to be my girlfriend. We’ve long been over even before we met…so kung iniisip mo na pinagsasabay ko kayong dalawa…you’re wrong.”

Parang naaliw sya sa narinig mula rito.

“Kapal mo ha!” Iningusan nya ito.

“Bakit?”

“Feeling mo naman naging girlfriend mo talaga ako…ano’ng two-time ang sinasabi mo dyan…Eh, ano’ng ginagawa nya sa Hacienda nu’n? Nung…dumating sya?” tanong niya.

“She wanted to win me back…pero…may iba na kasing naka-win ng thump-thump ko eh, and I fell in-love for the first time.” and Zack winked at her.

Pakiramdam nya ay bigla syang naka-recover sa imaginary virus na kunyari ay nakuha nya.

Tumawa ulit si Zack.

“Yung totoo…yung virus na nakuha mo ang pangalan ba…I Love You virus?” biro nito sa kanya.

“Aba masaya ka! Alam mo ang pangalan…nope! Ang tawag dito I Hate You virus!” Bulyaw nya sa mukha nito.

Bigla sya nitong sinunggaban at niyakap.

“Oh! I missed this…” anito.  At isiniksik pa nito ang sarili sa kanya.

Naitulak at natapik nya ito, paano ba naman kasi ay sa gitna ng dibdib nya ito sumisiksik.

“Hoy! Feeler ka naman…” at tumayo na sya.

“Where are you going?” tanong nito.

“Cr sama ka?” nakataas ang kilay na sabi niya.

“Pwede ba?” tanong nito.

Binelatan nya ito.

“Nek nek mo!” at tutungo na sana sa loob ng CR nang papasok rin sana ito.  Itinukod nya ang kamay sa dibdib nito.

“What’s there to hide?” tanong nito.

Pinamulahan sya ng mukha.

“Ano’ng what’s there to hide? Tae gusto mong makita? Ha?” Ingit nya rito. “Magha-happy poo-poo ako.”

Pinagtawanan nya ang mukha nito.

“Bilisan mo ha, may pupuntahan tayo.” sabi nito.

 

PINAGBAON siya nito ng mga damit at ilang kagamitan para raw sa pupuntahan nilang lugar. And Zack drove four hours para makarating sila sa isang resort sa Batangas na pag-aari raw ni Van.

It was a beautiful beach resort na sobrang ganda na kung pwede lang sana ay dun na siya tumira.

The room that they chose was the one facing the sea and through the window ay pinapanood nya ang paglubog ng haring araw.

Lumabas sya para mas mapanood ang sunset sa dalampasigan mismo.

Niyakap sya ni Zack mula sa likuran.

“So what do I do to make you say you love me too?” tanong nito.

She just smiled.

“Wala…” pakipot pa nya.

He nibbled her ear.

“Tahooo!”

Madali  nyang hinanap ang nagbebenta nu’n.

“Taho!” Tawag nya sa mama na papadaan sa likod nya. Lumapit naman ito.

“Hapon na ata, manong.” dudang tanong ni Zack.

“Oo nga po sir…madalang na po kasi ang bumibili nito ngayon…kuu eh wala lang talagang ibang mapagkikitaan eh..”

“Bilis manong…isang baso po…” excited na sabi nya. Mabilis naman sya nitong binigyan.

“Bibilhin ko na lahat yan manong…pati na yang lalagyan…” at  ikinagulat yun ng matanda pero nang bigyan ni Zack ng pera at mabilang nito ay nakangising yumukod ito.

“Salamat sir…” anito.

“Hmmm…ang sarap…miss na miss ko na talaga to…” napapikit pa sya at ninamnam ang pagkain sa taho. “Sarap naman! Salamat at dumaan ka, manong! I love you, manong!” sambit nya.

Dumilim bigla ang hilatsa ng pagmumukha ni Zack at padaskol na binawi ang pera sa matanda.

“Akin na ulit yan Manong…” anito at binigyan lang ito ng isangdaan. “Sa susunod ha ‘wag na kayong dumaan dito, wala pa naman kayong permit…at mag-present kayo ng sanitary certificate ha na malinis yan!” Litanya ni Zack na kulang na lang ay pagsisipain ang dalawang malalaking lata na bitbit ng matanda.

“Naku sir naman…”

“Umalis na nga kayo sa paningin ko manong at baka-“

Tinapik nya si Zack dahil nagtatakbo ang matanda palayo.

“Ano’ng problema mo?”

“Oh? Hindi mo alam?” tanong ni Zack.

Nagi-guilty naman sya at pinaglaruan pa nya ito. Tuloy ang napagbalingan ay ang kawawang matanda.

“Tara na at madilim na…” nauna na itong bumalik sa suite na inuukupahan nya.

Nakangusong sinundan nya ito.

“Hoy! May PMS ka?” tanong nya nang makarating sa silid.

Bugnot ang mukha nitong nilingon sya. Pero hindi sya pinansin…

Tinabihan nya ito sa pagkakaupo sa sofa bed.

It was already too silent when she whispered.

“I love you too…”

Mabilis ang ginawa nitong paglingon sa kanya.

“What’s that again?” tanong nito.

“Ingon nako gihigugma tika!” Sigaw nya sa tenga nito, sa lakas nun ay napapikit ito.

She said that in visayan.

“I can hear you right, you didn’t have to do that.” anito at inalog-alog ang ulo nito.

“You heard it, right? Bakit ko narinig na sinabi mong ‘what’s that again’?” she asked copying his expression.

Bigla naman sya nitong dinamba at pumaibabaw ito sa kanya.

Kinagat nito ang kanyang ilong na wari ay nanggigigil.

And then he showered kisses all over her face.

“I love you.” she finally told him.

She just smiled at him.

She also showered kisses all over his face and he said…

“I love you more…” anito. “ And I promise na hindi na magdududa pa sa’yo…I will only listen  to this.” he even touched her chest area.

Kinagat din nya ang matangos nitong ilong.

“Kung saan saan ka na humahawak ha…”

“E di kung saan-saan ka rin humawak sakin para makaganti ka…free of charge..”

“Gusto mo ulit ng sucker-punch?” pananakot nya rito.

“Nope…but this thicko would like to do this…”

 

HE CLAIMED her lips and through his kisses he made her feel what he really have been longing to make her feel.

“I have a question!” She raised her right hand.

“Hmm?”

“I’m just curious, what do you mean when you said Rafael doesn’t deserve me? Is it because you think I am a home wrecker and despicable?” she asked.

Zack looked at her truthfully.

“No…it’s because I deserve you…”

Sa narinig ay sya na ang humila sa ulo nito para mahalikan ulit nya ito. “And I deserve you too…kahit may pagka-feeler at padalos-dalos ka.” she joked. They both laughed.

They made love the whole night forgetting all about dinner.

She had never felt so happy as she surrendered to him over and over again. With each time they reach the climax, he would look at her in the eyes and tell her how much he loves her.

She doesn’t know the how’s and why’s, she fell inlove with Hazel Eyes…

Zack made her realize that behind his hazel eyes there was so much more about him that he would introduce to her starting today and for the rest of their lives.

 

MIA WOKE up feeling so sore from their love-making last night, which they did a couple of times… Nakalipat na pala sila sa kama mismo.

Nilingon nya si Zack sa kanyang tabi at hindi napigilan na haplusin ang mukha nito.  Napakunot-noo sya nang mapansin ang makislap na bato ng singsing sa kanyang kamay.

She didn’t have any ring on her finger when they came here, and she didn’t have any ring looking like this one…this looks real…as in real diamond…

Napatingala sya sa kisame …meroong nakasulat doon.

I AM NEVER GOOD AT WORDS BUT…

WHAT THE HECK…

MARRY ME!

 

Natawa sya…Pinintalan pa talaga ang kisame ng mga salitang ‘yun…

Ibang klase namang proposal ito, parang sakalan ang dating…hindi pa talaga sya tinanong kung papayag ba sya…

Well then it’s a wise idea so that she can’t say no. She really won’t say no…she will never say no…

And she will tell him “yes” in the morning…for now…pinagod sya nito and she deserved some sleep…

 

~The End~

 

A/N: Uhm… so that’s it… hoped you liked it ^_^

I’d just like to thank Ms. Pinaywriter, ang panlaban namin sa lahat ng bagay at pinagmamalaki naming EIC sa tiyaga niya sa story kong ito… saka sa napakagandang si Empresz sa pag-edit at proofread narin sa amateur kong story hehe at kay Tinz at sa iba pang mga nangungulit sa part 2 nito… salamat ng marami!!! ^_^

 

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159 thoughts on “Behind His Hazel Eyes 2- Chapter 9 (END)

  1. super ganda!

    Posted by tin | Oktubre 19, 2015, 9:52 hapon
  2. Ang ganda supper..🙂

    Posted by cherry torrevillas | Hunyo 25, 2014, 10:11 umaga
  3. Ang gnda tlaga…kakilig…

    Posted by apriljoymarcellana | Hunyo 13, 2014, 4:57 hapon
  4. Ang ganda tlaga.. kakilig…

    Posted by apriljoymarcellana | Hunyo 13, 2014, 4:56 hapon
  5. Nice move thicko😉😉 )))

    Posted by sushibar | Pebrero 18, 2014, 4:25 hapon
  6. this story was awesome! sobrang ganda wlang boring parts,ms. athena thankz po
    sarap mainlove over and over again,actually inlove aq everyday!

    pero sarap dn m2log,

    Posted by aileen | Oktubre 26, 2013, 12:08 umaga
  7. Ganda

    Posted by Florvin | Agosto 30, 2013, 2:43 hapon
  8. 🙂 ganda

    Posted by vhenus | Mayo 6, 2013, 12:03 hapon
  9. nakaka – INLOVE !!!!!!!

    Posted by RAELNY ABIGAILLE BREYER | Enero 30, 2013, 11:25 umaga
  10. L0ve it ..really2x nice 1

    Posted by Shielane | Enero 7, 2013, 6:09 hapon
  11. Wow ang ganda ‘i really l0ve ds storii;-)

    Posted by Shielane | Enero 7, 2013, 6:07 hapon
  12. Sobrang gnda ka2kilig…thanks p0h….

    Posted by infinity mercado | Setyembre 20, 2012, 7:57 hapon
  13. sobra…ganda!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Posted by theahassa | Setyembre 8, 2012, 4:59 hapon
  14. Grabe ang Ganda ng story., keep up d Gud work Mga guys.. God bless..;)

    Posted by Kimberly may Tinao Villanueva | Setyembre 6, 2012, 8:14 umaga
  15. Ahhhhh! What a nice story. This is heaven! :)) Salute to the author/s :))

    Posted by dianne | Agosto 28, 2012, 7:13 hapon
  16. Ang ganda..one of my favorite….galing po ng wirter…thanks for creating one….kakainggit nman ang mga girl dito sa novel…

    Posted by alma | Agosto 26, 2012, 12:08 hapon
  17. ms. athena, are you not a writer in one of the famous publishing houses here in the philippines?! if you really are not, have you tried submitting one of your works? kasi you’re soooo effin’ good at this.😀
    i just love your characters especially the male parts, they made me fall in love with them and wished they’re all real. parang kahanay mo na sina ms. martha cecilia, helen meriz, and the likes.
    YOU ARE ONE OF THE BEST WRITERS, i tell you. *salute ^_^

    Posted by dartz43 | Agosto 22, 2012, 3:14 umaga
  18. AAAAAAMAZING!🙂

    Posted by Icell | Agosto 16, 2012, 10:16 hapon
  19. hehehe ang ganda…

    Posted by Grace | Agosto 11, 2012, 10:43 hapon
  20. love the story:)

    Posted by sefiro11 | Hunyo 14, 2012, 5:52 hapon
  21. wOw! . .itz realy emprezing st0ry =)

    Posted by pazawaiy_1901 | Mayo 22, 2012, 4:31 hapon
  22. damn!! I want more! give me more! Super ganda ng story! ! AS IN !

    Posted by Kate Nicole Paler | Mayo 16, 2012, 3:26 hapon
  23. what the heck….and ganda ng story!

    Posted by jao | Mayo 12, 2012, 9:02 hapon
  24. gusto kong mabsa yung sotry ni dylan..anong title po?

    Posted by jao | Mayo 12, 2012, 8:42 hapon
  25. wla na akong nagawang work dahil sa kakabasa nto.hehe! ang ganda ng story nila zack ang mia…sobra tlga. galing ng writer🙂

    Posted by jao | Mayo 12, 2012, 8:41 hapon
  26. mmmhhhhffff…..makailang beses ko na nga bang nabasa ‘to? 7? hindi ko na matandaan…hindi kasi talaga ako nagsasawa eh!…binabalik-balikan ko talaga ‘tong story na ‘to….pwedeng magrequest? pwede po bang magkaroon ‘to ng part 3? yung story na kasama na nina zack at mia yung mga kids nila?….ang ganda kasi talaga eh!!!!!!!!!sana nga magkaroon ng part 3…….

    Posted by gesela | Abril 9, 2012, 4:45 hapon
  27. Isang malaking ‘check’ ito..bravo!

    Posted by Lady | Marso 22, 2012, 10:44 hapon
  28. ganda ng stooory thanks!!!!!❤ it

    Posted by yen | Marso 21, 2012, 11:39 hapon
  29. ayeeeeeeeeeeeee! kakakilig!! ang ganda!😀

    Posted by hannah | Marso 19, 2012, 3:59 hapon
  30. very inspiring nman…nakaka-inlove…

    Posted by dothy | Marso 17, 2012, 6:00 hapon
  31. hello sana po magkaroon ng story sina Van at Lucy

    Posted by rosa.azul | Marso 14, 2012, 10:57 hapon
  32. I have already read the story of Rafael and Charlize, Zack and Mia, Dylan and Ziggy – super duper impressed ako sa mga kwento nila.
    I hope mari-read ko story nina Van and Lucy. What’s the title kaya?
    By the way, Miss Author, ur da best!

    Posted by ic | Marso 14, 2012, 8:02 hapon
  33. ang ganda talaga….. diba si dylan ung naging asawa ni zaggy??? heehhehehe parang dugtong2 ung story… gusto ko na rin mabasa ung story ni van at lucy….. ah i remember c rafael pinsan ni dylan na nagsabi na pinalaglag ung baby nila ni charlize…. haist…..

    Posted by Vhang2 | Pebrero 23, 2012, 8:41 hapon
  34. whoaah…i spent a good deal of time reading this story. Nagenjoy ako. Lakas maka laughtrip! I admire your sense of humor kasi im kinda introver and my stories reflect my character. Serious mode lagi. Di ko alam pano magpatawa.lol! Keep it up, writer!

    Posted by shelly | Pebrero 18, 2012, 6:23 hapon
  35. Nice one! Hard writing makes easy reading. Easy writing makes hard reading. :))
    Keep writing. Kudos! :))

    Posted by akoposiF | Pebrero 10, 2012, 1:14 hapon
  36. Nice one! Hard writing makes easy reading. Easy writing makes hard reading. :))
    Keep writing! Kudos :))

    Posted by akoposiF | Pebrero 10, 2012, 1:12 hapon
  37. what can i say? hay…worth it ang 50 gils….

    Posted by gelina | Enero 31, 2012, 3:57 hapon
  38. worth it!! mabasa nga ulit ung baby love? at happily never after😀 na miss ko tuloy tumawa at umiyak at the same time wahahahah

    Posted by itsgonnabeme | Enero 20, 2012, 5:22 hapon
  39. weeee!! i like the proposal..

    agree ako kay ate pinay parang ten years na nga bago to nailabas.. remember ko pa ung time na hindi pa to nailabas.. halos buong araw ako sa harap ng comp. F5 ng F5 nagbabasakali na may bagong post ng BHHE : ))

    Posted by itsgonnabeme | Enero 20, 2012, 5:19 hapon
  40. wahh…grave super kilig Prng bitin p 2loy.. gcngin q n nga lng c Zack q pra my 3., ayieeh,…

    Posted by yuuna | Enero 13, 2012, 11:51 hapon
  41. bakit namn 50 gills ? osia mabasa na nga😀 worth it namn

    Posted by Thea Jane | Enero 10, 2012, 7:26 hapon
  42. kung sino man ang may busilak na puso dyan na naaawa sa kawa-awang kalagayan ko, pwde ba kaung magdonate ng gils kahit kunti lng, pasasalamatan ko kau ng buong-buo galing sa puso ko.
    (emote to the highest level!! ndi kasi natapos yung last part na ginawa ni ma’am athena. tsk… tsk…)

    to ma’am athena, wow grabe Goddess ka nga kasi yung mga works mo pang Mt. Olympus ang level… hehe…

    DYK: I’m your fan

    Posted by dia | Enero 2, 2012, 8:16 hapon
  43. OH MY GOSHNESH!!!! 50 gils??? 10 gils nlng meron akuh…mabait nmn akuh ba’t nangyari sa akin tuh…

    Posted by dia | Enero 2, 2012, 8:04 hapon
  44. i super love this story, 2nd tym q n nbsa toh pero super excited pdin aq s pgbbsa…

    Posted by jhovelle paunil | Disyembre 31, 2011, 3:28 hapon
  45. hindi worth it ang 50 pesos ko…don’t get me wrong kaso bitin pa talaga e at saka parang ang bilis lang nung pangyayari…haizt! pero i really love the story…

    Posted by jsjti | Disyembre 30, 2011, 8:15 umaga
  46. Wow, sulit na sulit paggamitan ng gils,

    Posted by Abbythe1 | Disyembre 28, 2011, 5:02 hapon
  47. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa kulang gils ko last chapter na nga eh huhu helppppppppp

    Posted by pilyasuplada623 | Disyembre 8, 2011, 11:18 umaga
  48. ang ganda. very nice story talaga ms. athena.

    Posted by mae | Disyembre 2, 2011, 10:22 umaga
  49. talaga naman sobrang seloso ah.. haha.. anywayz a nice story talaga.. thanks ms. athena.

    Posted by Faige | Nobyembre 30, 2011, 3:43 hapon
  50. I really love the story ang ganda ganda talaga.

    Posted by annalyn co | Nobyembre 24, 2011, 2:34 hapon
  51. hay naku! super like it tlga! grabe! more more more ms. atheneshih…..

    Posted by anchine | Nobyembre 17, 2011, 3:09 hapon
  52. grabe naman bat ang mahal naman ng last chapter? huhhhhhhhhh, buti nlng my 55 gils ako kasya p to, hehehe

    Posted by anchine | Nobyembre 17, 2011, 2:45 hapon
  53. At last I’m done reading it. I so love it! Thank you for your talent Athena *_*

    Posted by inularah | Nobyembre 17, 2011, 5:26 umaga
  54. Clap!clap!clap!:)
    thumbs up! ang galing..
    sobrang pinakilig ako ng story na toh.:)
    hahah!

    Posted by agashijang | Nobyembre 11, 2011, 11:44 hapon
  55. grabe.. ang ganda ng story

    Posted by mary cruz | Nobyembre 9, 2011, 11:37 hapon
  56. OMG worth it ng gils ko… thank you so much sa story

    Posted by annamay | Nobyembre 8, 2011, 12:14 hapon
  57. i sooooooo love the story.❤

    Posted by khaye purple | Nobyembre 5, 2011, 4:23 hapon
  58. Sure ka Miss Athena na pang-amateur ‘to? aheheh

    The story is beautiful…

    I mean it…^_^*)””

    Posted by talynhaga | Oktubre 30, 2011, 1:07 umaga
  59. natapos rin sa wakas.. special thanks to Heidz Ventura sa pag donate ng gils.. kung wla xa. di ko to matatapos now.. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa… thank you rin sa writer… kung wla sya di ko to mababasa.. at sa TOP… hihihi… more power TOP writers and readers ^^

    Posted by Aika | Oktubre 25, 2011, 2:44 hapon
  60. huhu kulang p gils ko..=(

    Posted by caiky18 | Oktubre 20, 2011, 6:56 hapon
  61. wooowwww,….

    ganda po nito…hindi ako nagsisisi na 17 na lang gils ko…

    hehehe

    Posted by darlaine_628 | Oktubre 14, 2011, 9:06 hapon
  62. tawa much..😀 unique ang proposal.. hahaha.. ai lab it!
    hayy..paubos na gils ku.

    Posted by angel16 | Oktubre 3, 2011, 6:32 umaga
  63. ah ito pala yung ending na nabasa ko sa old forum? di ko sure basta nabasa ko sya..😀

    anyway, ang ganda.. nakakaenjoy basahin.. ang kulit ni Mia..😀 nice.. dami kong tawa.. kilig much din.. thank you po..🙂

    Posted by rishelL_18th | Setyembre 28, 2011, 8:22 hapon
  64. haha,nakakatawa naman ang ending.
    hirap nga talaga mag confess ng feelings muh sa isang tao noh ?
    ganyan din kasi ako.
    at last natapos din ito.
    love this story eh🙂

    Posted by rose ghelaine | Setyembre 26, 2011, 3:22 umaga
  65. there..natapos na din..madami pa bang series??

    Posted by cutiektine | Setyembre 17, 2011, 2:18 umaga
  66. hay!natapusan ko ring basahin ang super duper na napakgandang story.thanks ms athenashih,,and thanks TOP sa mga mgagandang story.

    Posted by marie_jl | Setyembre 11, 2011, 7:22 hapon
  67. ayy oh….tapos na kabitin naman…ang galing naman mag propose ni zackk….loveetttt….wala po bang story ung kay van at lucy?

    Posted by aiza | Setyembre 8, 2011, 4:45 umaga
  68. huwaatt 100 pala…bakit double naman ang gils nito…hihhih neway last chap. na…sa wakas..

    Posted by aiza | Setyembre 8, 2011, 4:29 umaga
  69. waaah cant read this last chapter, how can i earn more gils?

    Posted by jessibel_121888 | Setyembre 6, 2011, 1:29 umaga
  70. waaah cant read this last chapter, need more gils to rea this. how can i earn more gils?

    Posted by jessibel_121888 | Setyembre 6, 2011, 1:28 umaga
  71. hhahahahaa sapilitan ang proposal ehh,,
    talaga to c zack ,
    pero maganda talaga tong story nato,
    ^_^

    Posted by rielle | Agosto 30, 2011, 7:20 hapon
  72. giving credit to all the writer here in TOP.. thanks po ;))))

    Posted by mane9185 | Agosto 28, 2011, 9:33 hapon
  73. ayieee worth it talaga ang pagiipon ko ng gils sa mga stories dito.. :))) thanks …! super like

    Posted by mane9185 | Agosto 28, 2011, 9:31 hapon
  74. kawawawang mangtataho…. sobrang ganda ng ending… love it..

    Posted by jermae | Agosto 24, 2011, 8:23 umaga
  75. worth it ang 100 gils! natapos ko rin sa wakas. ang ganda!ü

    Posted by sweet_orange1226 | Agosto 22, 2011, 3:56 hapon
  76. wahh 100gils pala b4 ko mabasa to.. super bitin😦

    Posted by sweet_orange1226 | Agosto 21, 2011, 1:01 hapon
  77. ay naku pagkatapos ko kiligin ng bongang-bonga after ko itong matapos bigla akong na sad kc na miss ko ang honey ko….

    Posted by mjmercado | Agosto 17, 2011, 6:47 hapon
  78. hay kilig nmn from the start to the end tapos na parang bitin pa more… more…more… big hug kay zack…

    thanks ms. athena pinakilig mo ang araw ko….

    Posted by mjmercado | Agosto 17, 2011, 6:43 hapon
  79. super gandang story….

    Posted by seanrobert | Agosto 15, 2011, 9:30 hapon
  80. thanks sa opportunity na mabasa ko itong story.. ang ganda.. grabe di sayang pag iipon ko ng gils.. saka sa mga NAKAW na sandali ko dito sa opiz.

    Posted by cally23 | Agosto 12, 2011, 5:32 hapon
  81. super like…:D

    Posted by Charm | Agosto 11, 2011, 10:22 umaga
  82. haaayy,,.. ang ganda nman, sarap ulit-ulitin.. congrats sa author.

    Posted by jikie | Agosto 9, 2011, 1:10 umaga
  83. nice story and plot… its has a love ending with a twist of unique marriage proposal… Thumbs up for the writer

    Posted by Hazel_lovely85 | Hulyo 30, 2011, 2:54 umaga
  84. i love TOP very much!

    Posted by marylyn | Hulyo 29, 2011, 12:25 umaga
  85. naman sana libre na lang ang gils. .haha

    Posted by renee | Hulyo 15, 2011, 1:34 hapon
  86. best description of the best❤
    sobrang ganda…kso parang bitiin p din..
    ahaha part 3 n yan😀

    Posted by elaine18 | Hulyo 11, 2011, 9:01 hapon
  87. best description of the best❤

    Posted by elaine18 | Hulyo 11, 2011, 9:00 hapon
  88. SUCH A NICE STORY!!!!!!
    ISA ‘TO SA MGA PINAKAFAVORITE STORIES KO AS IN………….
    KINILIG TALAGA AKO NG TODO…………SOBRANG GANDA NUNG STORY AS IN……WALA AKONG MASABI……….SANA MAKAKITA RIN AKO NG KATULAD NI ZACK…………

    Posted by Gesela Mae | Hulyo 8, 2011, 7:14 hapon
  89. nice!!!! i love this story!!! i wanna read it over and over again.

    Posted by laramaeperez | Hulyo 5, 2011, 9:49 hapon
  90. Waaa sobra-sobra ko tong inabanga 6 months din ako naghintay, inabangan ko na sya ever since (nung wala pang gils2x) hehe, pero in fairness patience is a virtue, sulit na sulit paghihintay ko 2 thumbs up sa author love the ending especially the proposal ahhh, wish it will happen to me HHHA!

    Posted by Amp | Hulyo 5, 2011, 12:26 umaga
  91. i really like this story…good job for the writer!

    Posted by shania | Hulyo 1, 2011, 10:26 hapon
  92. wahaha.. nyc wedding proposal..🙂

    Posted by vern | Hunyo 25, 2011, 5:35 hapon
  93. inabangan ko tong story na 2.. hehehe two thumbs up! super like! =)

    Posted by hun23 | Hunyo 25, 2011, 1:22 umaga
  94. talagang like it.,i l0ve ths st0ry much..much…

    Posted by BIEBIE | Hunyo 25, 2011, 12:02 umaga
  95. wohooo! gandaaaa. super duper like! :DD

    Posted by arabeybsxP | Hunyo 21, 2011, 4:55 umaga
  96. its a nice story

    Posted by herberly | Hunyo 20, 2011, 6:42 hapon
  97. i’ve waited for this one.. mabuti na lang na ipost na.. ganda.:)

    Posted by gbarlisan | Hunyo 18, 2011, 3:55 hapon
  98. nku sna mkaipon ako ng marming gils pra mbasa ko n to.. base s mga comments mukha ngang mganda… paano po b mgdonate? di kc ako makaipon ng gils s gbi lng kc ako my tym mgcomputer… hayssss suggestion lng po ha…. sna merong teaser n di n kelangan ng gils ang lahat ng stories d2 s TOP. more power snyong mga writer ng TOP kyo ngppwala ng homesick ko d2 s japan…

    Posted by jam | Hunyo 17, 2011, 10:29 hapon
  99. sana may mag donate din ng gils sakin..huhuhu matagal ko ng inaabangan ung continuation nito dati pa dun sa lumang site ng TOP. Ngayon lang ulit ako nakapag log in dito..Kelangan na pala ng gils para makpag basa..haiz..so sad naman..

    Posted by Kenkian | Hunyo 17, 2011, 5:48 hapon
  100. super love it! yeah

    Posted by Kenkian | Hunyo 17, 2011, 5:03 hapon
  101. this story deserve not just a thumbs up but a hands down. it’s so kilig that leaves me dreaming of finding my own zack. ok na siguro kahit mabaril ako. hahahaha.

    Posted by lukaylovesme | Hunyo 15, 2011, 9:50 hapon
  102. Yeah. Madaling-araw na pala? Grabe, sa sobrang ganda hindi ko na ininda ang oras. Hehehehehe :’> Grabe, ganda-ganda!!! Promise. Hindi nasayang ang mga gils ko. Hehehe. Worth it🙂 Congratulations for a very outstanding creation, Ms. Athena at sa lahat ng nasa likod ng obra maestra na itech. Hehehe :)) Keep it up! Godbless :))

    Posted by missKeroppi | Hunyo 13, 2011, 12:00 umaga
  103. congrats to ms. athena,… tagal qng hinintay ang karugtong nito,.. the part two,.. ang ganda… super!! i really love the story,.. mai-inspire talaga ko magsulat nito,.. hehe🙂

    Posted by heidz | Hunyo 11, 2011, 7:31 hapon
  104. Sa wakas ntapos k na rn..ang ganda

    Posted by darkangel | Hunyo 9, 2011, 7:48 umaga
  105. sa tinagal tagal din daw ng paghihintay… natapos ko din!!! salamat…

    ang ganda…. sa mga susunod ulit…🙂

    Posted by chubby | Hunyo 8, 2011, 2:51 umaga
  106. finally i’m finished!!! ganda….. galing galing…. sa susunod ulit!

    Posted by chubby | Hunyo 8, 2011, 2:38 umaga
  107. hay.. akala ko matatapos ko na hindi pa pala… huhuhu.. kulang pa ako ng gils!!!!

    Posted by chubby | Hunyo 6, 2011, 1:04 umaga
  108. worth waiting and reading… thanks a lot…. it’s indeed a very nice story! keep it up!

    Posted by rosan314 | Hunyo 6, 2011, 12:27 umaga
  109. finally, natapos ko din. I’ve waited for months para mabasa ito. ang ganda-ganda ng story. i love it very much!

    Posted by laramaeperez | Hunyo 5, 2011, 8:23 hapon
  110. first of all..kung walang gils hindi ko to matatapos..akalain mu ba namang kanina 0 balance na ko sa gils tpos biglang nag 200..very very thankful ako..

    second of all..para kay ms.Athena sabi nga nila khit 10 years na ang nkalilipas bago mailabas ang BHHE2 eh inabangan pa rin nmin ksi mhirap talaga ang bitin.at kasi maganda talaga ang story.

    third of all.para kay ms.Athena.my favor po ako.sana kapag naumpisahan ko ng gawin ang novel ko at natapos.sana mag comment kayo.hehehe ang simple pero yun talaga gusto ko eh. YOURE 1 OF MY IDOL.pagdating sa pagsusulat.

    thank you again.for a very nice story! hehehe mwaaahhh mwaaahhh

    Posted by jayselle | Hunyo 4, 2011, 11:50 hapon
    • naks naman tong si jayselle oh, pinapalobo ang atay ko haha salamat ng marami…

      sige bilisan mo tapusin ang novel mo at ako mag-edit before mapunta sa EIC… I’m sure maganda yan…

      Sabi nga nila diba… kung may story ka sa utak mo na gusto mong mabasa pero hindi mo mahanap kahit saan… pwes IKAW na ang magsulat dahil ikaw lang ang makakapagsatisfy sa sarili mo… at tsanang! without really knowing it WRITER ka na rin.. hehe

      Posted by AthenaShih | Hunyo 5, 2011, 12:40 umaga
      • wow naman..maraming maraming salamat..dream come true…nagcomment na kayo hahaha!!..

        sa lalong madaling panahon uumpisahan ko na yung novel ko…

        Posted by jayselle | Hunyo 5, 2011, 10:15 umaga
  111. thanks miss athena, ang ganda ng BHHE talaga…
    job well done po😀

    Posted by jeytil | Hunyo 4, 2011, 11:07 hapon
  112. finally nabasa ko din ang ending..super kilig! can’t help it but to smile para tuloy ako baliw hahaha..worth it ang mga naipon kong gils..thank you sa magandang story^_^

    curious lang ako..anu na nagyari kay manong taho..wawa naman kc sya eh..nadamay pa sa pagseselos ni zach..

    Posted by poopzy | Hunyo 4, 2011, 10:33 hapon
  113. thanks athenashih…..till your next story ^__^

    Posted by Ikay | Hunyo 4, 2011, 7:47 hapon
  114. finally after 5 months ntapos ko n rin basahin toh =) nice story athenaShih..super like..!!

    Posted by Anne | Hunyo 4, 2011, 3:05 hapon
  115. waaahh 100 gils pla e2 nakow iipon pa pla ako para mabasa ko to..=(

    Posted by poopzy | Hunyo 4, 2011, 2:53 hapon
  116. Ayyyieee..Super ganda talaga ng story na ito..One of the best stories here on top..kahit almost 4 am na hnde ko pa rin tinantanan na hnde basahin lahat..ang tagal-tagal ko ng hinintay kasi ito kaso hnde palaging kasya gils ko para mabasa to and im so thankful sa nagdonate ng gils kaya natapos ko na din basahin ang BHHE…
    More power to Ms. Athena…Keep up writing..:-)

    Posted by puffy | Hunyo 4, 2011, 3:55 umaga
  117. grabe tagal kong hinintay tong story na to…atlast nabasa ko na rin…na inspire tuloy akong gumawa ng story…my own story hindi ko nga lang alam kung anong ending…thanks po..

    Posted by sam | Hunyo 4, 2011, 1:36 umaga
  118. sa wakas nabasa ko na RIN tnx ang ganda ng kwento… more power God bless

    Posted by blackrose | Hunyo 3, 2011, 5:12 hapon
  119. nice one athena….congrats…
    superb ganda n bhhe…
    tagl q n itong initay weh…
    sa waks ntapos q dn…whehehe
    kea lng ka2biten ng ending…
    wehhehehhe……
    so next n ang knia van at lucy….
    pati n dn kna rachel at caasidy…whehehhe
    {demanding} churyyy…peace…:)

    Posted by clarkeys | Hunyo 3, 2011, 4:15 umaga
  120. Arrgh..Kulang ng 40 ang gils ko para mabasa ko tong ending! Yh. nmn. >.<

    Posted by BlueAngel05 | Hunyo 2, 2011, 10:32 hapon
  121. wow.. Super kilig.. ang sweet ni zack!.. swerte naman nia.. grrrRRrr…
    hehehe

    Posted by Loveko | Hunyo 1, 2011, 6:15 hapon
  122. congrats athena..such a beautiful story…ganda ng twist din…next story soon….

    Posted by creative16 | Hunyo 1, 2011, 3:55 umaga
  123. really really LOVE it!!! Tnx Ms. Writer…hehehe

    Posted by grace | Mayo 31, 2011, 11:01 umaga
  124. ganda! sobra ahihihihi🙂 worth it ang pag aantay ko sobra!

    kaka inlove talaga c zack at mia… love it! crazy inlove (^_^)

    Ms. Athena looking forward sa story naman ni Van at Lucy

    Posted by macey_khet | Mayo 31, 2011, 3:58 umaga
  125. super ganda…..ang gagaling nyo gumawa ng stories, how i wish i could be like yours…..keep on writing🙂

    Posted by ghieann | Mayo 30, 2011, 1:11 hapon
  126. It’s worth the wait…buti n lang nakaipon ako ng 100gils at last natapos ko n rin. Thnx Miss Calla…kakakilig talaga ng mga story mo.

    More power.(.-.)

    Posted by sands17 | Mayo 26, 2011, 3:29 hapon
  127. WHOA! speechless ako! ang ganda! congrats!

    Posted by doreen5382 | Mayo 26, 2011, 3:46 umaga
  128. _hahaha.. ang ganda..^_^ tnx to ms. anthenashih hindi na kami nabitin…🙂

    Posted by @jenz | Mayo 25, 2011, 5:26 hapon
  129. teaser lng kyang basahin ng gils ko, hehehe

    Posted by anchine | Mayo 24, 2011, 3:33 hapon
  130. ang mahal nmn kc ng bayad ng gils d2, wla po bng discount? hehehe

    Posted by anchine | Mayo 24, 2011, 3:32 hapon
  131. need to earn gills, can’t wait to finish this story. =)

    Posted by aileenordonez | Mayo 24, 2011, 1:11 hapon
  132. grabe ang ganda sobra!!!!ang galing mo talaga ms. athena shih!!!ang galing galing mo grabe

    Posted by jessica14 | Mayo 24, 2011, 9:21 umaga
  133. ang super sweet nila!!! ang ganda ng story n sobrang nakakakilig to the bones🙂

    Posted by lady | Mayo 24, 2011, 7:30 umaga
  134. ganda naman ng story na tu… :))

    Posted by furabells | Mayo 23, 2011, 7:35 hapon
  135. ang ganda ng story.. parang ang sarap ma in love..

    Posted by rachel_22 | Mayo 23, 2011, 11:19 umaga
  136. ayyiiiieee ang ganda po..

    Posted by mia | Mayo 23, 2011, 10:28 umaga
  137. great story ang ganda po🙂

    Posted by rhein131 | Mayo 22, 2011, 7:02 hapon
  138. i love it🙂

    Posted by DEAR | Mayo 21, 2011, 10:03 hapon
  139. ang ganda hehehe!!!

    Posted by rhein131 | Mayo 21, 2011, 8:20 hapon
  140. Thank u sulit pagbabasa🙂

    Posted by clarizjohn_16 | Mayo 21, 2011, 11:07 umaga
  141. hahahahahahahahaha…♥it

    Posted by aclabmhie | Mayo 21, 2011, 6:35 umaga
  142. Ahhh! si van na lang ang kulang ate athena! wohoo! ang gandaaaaaa! love it!

    Posted by Ikai08 | Mayo 21, 2011, 6:34 umaga
  143. GRABE!!! ang ganda as in!!!!

    Posted by april_love07 | Mayo 20, 2011, 2:00 hapon
  144. Grabe tapos din ako ang ganda:) di ba po ba ito ang first tapos nezt yung baby and love tas yung happily never after? meron na po ba kayo story ni Van at lucy pati narin kay Rachell tsaka po yung kay Cassidy ? hehe wait ko po yun🙂

    Posted by darnav | Mayo 20, 2011, 12:20 hapon
  145. @ Pinaywriter salamat po sa pagtatapos ng story BHHE for us. Kahit naubos lahat ang pinag-iiponan kung GILS for the past few months ay sulit naman kasi nabasa ko ang isa sa inaabangan kung story dito sa TOP. Mag-iipon na lng po ako ulit. Salamat po once again…

    Posted by ylen | Mayo 20, 2011, 9:49 umaga
  146. I hope that your fans would be delighted with the version that we came up with kahit parang ten years na bago nailabas ang BHHE2. Keep writing and have fun in the process. ^.^

    Posted by pinaywriter | Mayo 20, 2011, 6:25 umaga

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